James,

I haven't been following this thread for some unknown reason but now that I have found it I just hope it's not too late.

I'm sorry to say but none of the outfits that you have put together have quite the right flare, not quite the right panache.

May I suggest you add a set of yellow flashes and a yellow feather fly plaid.

Alternately a silver lame vest or one with with a subtle rhinestone studded pattern.