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21st March 10, 01:13 PM
#15
Originally Posted by MacRobert's Reply
For a day-time wedding: kilt (usually made from eight yards of tartan wool) with kilt pin, tweed Argyll (or similar Crail or Braemar) jacket with antler buttons and matching five-button waistcoat or kilt belt in brown or black leather (but don’t wear a belt with a waistcoat), brown or black leather sporran and brogues, kilt hose and garter flashes to complement (or at least not clash with) the colours in the kilt and jacket (avoid hire-shop white hose unless you are a piper!), turn-down collar shirt (usually white) and tie (not tartan and often silver or a solid colour).
My comment has nothing to with content, just form. Something worth saying in parentheses is usually worth putting right there in the main text. A lot of parenthetical interjection makes text choppy and hard to read. For example, I'd re-write the quoted passage above this way:
For a day-time wedding, a kilt made from eight yards of wool tartan is worn. It is usually accompanied by a white turn-down collar shirt, a self-coloured tie, a tweed jacket with antler buttons in the Argyll, Crail or Bramer style, and a matching five-button waistcoat. Black or brown leather accessories include a kilt belt in place of the waistcoat, a sporran and brogues. Kilt hose with garter flashes that do not clash with the colours in the kilt and jacket are worn, avoiding the white hose normally used by pipers.
Abax
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