Critique my tartan design. what do you think ?

**R.S.L. Kiltwearer** · 18th July 11, 10:27 AM

Originally Posted by CMcG

At first look, it's quite nice. After looking in closer detail, I can try to make a suggestion. It looks a bit too busy to my eye because there are a number of smaller lines of the same or near the same thickness. Try mixing up the size of the lines to get the design to come together more.

i agree with it being to busy, if i ever get it wove i will get a pro to chang a few things i dont like. the program on the site i was using was mirroring everything and i was not to concerned with changing that at 2am

**R.S.L. Kiltwearer** · 18th July 11, 10:55 AM

here is one i did about three months ago, after seeing them both i like this one better

**sydnie7** · 18th July 11, 12:36 PM

Originally Posted by R.S.L. Kiltwearer

here is one i did about three months ago, after seeing them both i like this one better

I could be mistaken, but this one appears to be asymmetrical. Nothing inherently wrong with that (see "Maple Leaf") but it can lead to some challenges when having it woven and made up. I do like your color combo overall.

**CMcG** · 18th July 11, 12:39 PM

Originally Posted by sydnie7

I could be mistaken, but this one appears to be asymmetrical. Nothing inherently wrong with that (see "Maple Leaf") but it can lead to some challenges when having it woven and made up. I do like your color combo overall.

It looks asymmetrical to me too and in a far more obvious way than the Maple Leaf. I think I like the more limited colour palette better on this one than this second one than the first one.