I like it. I'm not 100% sure I would buy* it, but if I owned it I would certainly wear it.

The saltire imagery didn't click with me until it was mentioned. It might click more quickly if "Scotland" were moved along the curve in the direction of the S so that where the lines cross, you still have two white lines crossing rather than one line and one word?

That may but the text too far into the loop though.

Just a thought. Overall I like it and think it's fine as-is, just spit-balling since you asked



*not due to the design, just due to my clothing-purchase tendencies.