I think this coat has definite possibilities.
In my opinion though, it still needs a little work. Nothing that can't be fixed though!
You definitely need more of a cut for the sporran and to give it the right look. That cut will probably go right though or very near the lower button hole. That shouldn't be a big deal for anyone who knows what they're doing. Heck, I handled it, and I'm no tailor!
Making more of a cut for the sporran will in my opinion require the pocket slashes to be moved. There are a couple of ways to do that so it looks ok.
My method is to use the leftover material from the chop and use it to fashion patch pockets to just cover slash at the bottom of the patch pocket. There are other ways to handle it too if you'll look at several other threads on the subject.
Good luck with it. I think with a little more tailoring you'll be very happy with it.