My two cents...

I like the first and third photos. In each of those you seem to have caught a genuine moment in your model. The third one especially has an intensity that even though the lighting isn't perfect (or perhaps because of it) makes the photo about the serious expression and thoughts of the model instead of the outfit and setting.

The picture in front of the fireplace is well composed but it does come across as very staged. If you are emulating a particular style or portrait that is fine. I would have prefered it if you could have coaxed more expression from the model. That would have been outstanding.

The outdoor shots are well composed and photgraphed as well. They seem very much in the manner of a fashion shoot rather than art. The outfit seems to be the focus rather than the subject.

I hope you will share another group of photos with us in the future.