Utilikilt Mock-u-mercial Entry

[Captain]

Yeah, the script called for her to say something along the lines of, "You look nice...", but she just wouldn't say it. I had trouble not laughing my butt off as I left the frame each time. BTW, that is not my wife, that is one of my best friend's wife, which made it all the funnier.

[fluter]

Yeah, the script called for her to say something along the lines of, "You look nice...", but she just wouldn't say it.

And she was right! As it stands, this one is brilliant; and that one word just makes it. Congratulations to all the contributors---especially the cute young lady with good taste.

Your original idea certainly has promise, but it would all depend on execution. If she could have achieved just the right arch look, and just the right "niiice" ...

[Note to our overseas and latitude-challenged friends: the southern American "I" does not have a diphthong in it. I mean, there is no "ee" on the end of the sound: it is a pure vowel.]

Still, a really good director knows when to run with the instincts of the artists with whom he is working, and you just proved it.

[ConfusedPollock]

Dude, I hope you don't mind. I put it up in a bulletin on Myspace. It is pretty good and I hope it ranks well among the submissions they recieved.