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20th July 08, 02:38 PM
#1
Closing Scene
Private Villa on St. John, U.S.Virgin Islands
I had invited all those wounded in the escape for a little rest and relaxation at my private villa in the Caribbean. We all relaxed on the beach, soaking up a little sun.
Robert and his wife were sitting to my right. “So,” I asked. “Are you enjoying yourself?”
He took one of the drinks from the tray that Timothy offered. “My friend,” he said, “This is absolutely wonderful.”
“How’s your leg doing?”
He glanced down to the bandage around his thigh. “It is still sore, but I can use the leg with no problem.” He looked over to me and smiled. “I should learn to duck when you tell me, no?”
“Indeed you should.”
Livingston was sitting in the chair on my left. He too was now walking, but he still had a heavy limp. I noticed he was closely watching Ms. Thrush walking out of the surf. “I think I’m enjoying myself too,” he said with a big grin.
I looked around at the others. Dee was sitting at a table under a large umbrella, playing backgammon with Ms. Swan.
Unable to go into the water because of the healing burns on his back, Standard was arm wrestling with Ms. Hawk. I think he even managed to beat her a time or two.
My attention was drawn back to the lovely Ms. Starling who plopped down on my lounge chair between my legs with her back to me. “Yo, boss man,” she said, handing me a tube.
I took the tube from her and saw it was sunscreen. She reached back to untie her bikini top and held it to her chest. “Do my back,” she ordered.
“Yes, ma'am,” I answered, and immediately squirted some lotion into my hand.
I think I was enjoying myself too.
Last edited by davedove; 21st July 08 at 07:19 AM.
We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance. - Japanese Proverb
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20th July 08, 02:40 PM
#2
Acknowledgements and Thanks
So ends my third tale. I hope you liked it.
To the featured staff of X Marks the Scot:
Cajunscot
Panache
Starbkjrus
Arlen
Prestor John, our chaplain
To Grant’s forces
ccga3359
Big Mikey (I hoped you enjoyed being the noble villain)
Standard
The other kidnap victims:
The F-H.C.A.G. with Sinbad and Xena
Coemgen
macdoc451
Livingston (sorry you got shot again, but you did it as a hero)
Pleater
Pipesndrumsnun
Ancienne Alliance
SexyButler
Standard
James MacMillan
ladygriffin (thanks to you I was able to put a very human element into my story)
Many thanks to X Marks own security team (even though your appearance was brief):
Splash_4
BEEDEE
Weasel Mender
And the stars of my commercials:
Pleater for Stress Free
Wompet for X Chow
Big Mikey for X-Charge
Arlen for the Intelli-Quest
Standard for X Marks the Scot
Ms. Stork and the other members of my team in the story are completely fictional, except of course for Ms. Wren, Dirka Skene, but she wasn’t in the story anyway.
Finally, the two fallen members, Michael Newface and Peter Recruit, are completely fictional, but they will be missed anyway.
If I forgot anyone, I sincerely apologize.
We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance. - Japanese Proverb
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20th July 08, 02:41 PM
#3
Now, both Pleater and Panache have stories started. I won't do any more of my own until these are completed, but I'm sure another will come up after that.
We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance. - Japanese Proverb
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20th July 08, 04:40 PM
#4
I was only tempted to try my hand at writing due to the long intervals in other people's stories.
My present story will reveal why Pleater was not dancing at the start of the cruise.
Baroness Anne the mirthful of Fritterton on the Heath
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