Missions of the Retrieval Team - The Girl with the Silvery Smile

**davedove** · 6th March 08, 08:24 AM

Commercial Break

A table at a small bar

We see two kilted men sitting at the table, enjoying drinks and a small meal. They are talking with much animation.

“What about that part in the convention center?” asks the first man.

“Or how about what Wompet did to Grant?” the second man laughs.

The first man seems to notice the viewers. “Oh, hi,” he says. “I’m Livingston, also known as Mr. Loon. This is my friend, Erisianmonkey, who is also known as Mr. Toucan.”

“Hi,” says the second man. “I hope you enjoyed the story you just read. If you did, you can find other stories in the X Marks the Scot forum. Enjoy the stories.”

The two men turn back to their conversation.

The first man says, “Oh, how about that move that Mr. Dove used to take out Big Mikey.”

“Yeah, that big man really hit hard, didn’t he.”

Fade away

**davedove** · 6th March 08, 08:25 AM

Closing Scene

Ritchgarl Manor Apartment Building

I had taken Ms. Ritchgarl back to her residence, an upscale building owned by her parents corporation.

“I want to thank you so much,” she said to me outside her door.

I opened the door for her. “It was a privilege, all in the line of duty.”

“You’re not leaving already are you?” she asked.

“Yes, I’m afraid I have to go. Mike is due to call me at any moment.”

“But,” she said, reaching out to run her finger along the buttons of my shirt, “I haven’t found out what’s under your kilt yet.” She gave me a playful smile.

Just then my cell phone started to ring. I glanced at the caller ID. It was Mike.

I looked back at Emma. She had stepped into her apartment. She beckoned me inside with her finger.

I smiled back at her. “Mike can wait.” I stepped into the apartment, tossing my phone onto the small table there. I closed and locked the door behind me.

**Panache** · 6th March 08, 04:57 PM

Fun Stuff Dave,

Next time your group should go across the pond and work with the MHICE!

Originally Posted by davedove

...It was then that I noticed the large object above us. A large blimp was moving over us.... One set of lights revealed a large red maple leaf on the side of the airship...“YOU FOOLS! YOU CANNOT HOLD ME! BY MY GORGEOUS, FLOWING, GOLDEN LOCKS AND FIRM ROUND BUTTOCKS YOU WILL NEVER HOLD ME! HA HA HA HA HA HA!” he cackled madly

Tsk, Tsk it appears Grant has a new blimp.

Something shall have to be done about this!*

Cheers

Jamie

* I have got to stop hanging out with Freelander Sporrano!