I agree with all the above. Firstly, I agree that you are very well turned out and just need some little tweaks here and there.

The bonnet leans towards the historical, but I like the way you are wearing it in the second picture of the three. It's probably the nicest 'blue bonnet' that I've seen.

I'm not a fan of button-down collars.

I would fasten the bottom button on your waistcoat.

I'd wear the watch chain with the bar inside.

Your sporran looks like it might possibly be a youth's sporran. Adult sporrans are typically 7" wide, I think.

Your kilt pin would be safer the other way up.

Your kilt and hose both look a tad high (not often I get to say that!).

You are showing a bit too much garter.

That may seem like a long list, but they are all just minor details.