Honestly? I think two things would improve this jacket.
1. A more rounded shape to the bottom.
2. Do without the satin facings. To me the satin and corduroy just don't work well together. I would have either used only the corduroy cloth, or if you wanted any sort of contrasting facings used a brown leather.

But that's my taste, and you of course have the benefit of seeing the jacket in person and so have a better idea of how it really looks.