How's the look?

[Grizzly]

David I think you have done very well, you look comfortable which is an achievement in itself. The one thing I would change is your footwear, a smart pair of oxfords or brogues would look far better and raise the level of sartorial elegance. This is just my humble opinion and is worth diddly squat compared to some of our more learned members. But it's a great start well done.