Give the kilt less taper- men don't have as great a difference betwen waist & hips as women. Yeah, I know, it's a subtle point, but minimal graphics need as much help as they can get!
MUCH better! The only other suggestion I would make is to go for a less common font- probably not a full-out Gaelic uncial font, maybe something like Dom Casual or Hobo- a less formal look.
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