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A Poem
Written by Yours Truly
Long, smooth legs and muscular shoulder
Pale tan calm that's strong as boulders
Easy you go, fine frisky thing
Through copper bells your greatness rings
Forest and mountain, glen and stream
your beauty shines and haunts my dreams
Though sometimes rough your rules steadfast
I stand beside you till feints have past
Whether Spain or Cuba your influence gleaned
It's my Heiland heart ye cannae waen
Heather or sea, whatever your flavor
You warm embrace I've come to savor.
Sure, not my best poem. Question is, am I writing about my girlfriend...or whisky?
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Hmmm....
Shows how refined I am, I thought it was about a horse!! 
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Ode to Old Pulteney.
Chris.
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 Originally Posted by MacMillan's son
Shows how refined I am, I thought it was about a horse!!
To me, sounded more like a man being described in the poem...
Last edited by Bugbear; 9th May 11 at 06:18 PM.
I tried to ask my inner curmudgeon before posting, but he sprayed me with the garden hose…
Yes, I have squirrels in my brain…
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Originally Posted by Bugbear
To me, sounded more like a man being described in the poem...
Haahah! To each their own, I guess!
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Originally Posted by beloitpiper
Haahah! To each their own, I guess!
Tomboy maybe...? I can see that.
I don't know anything about whisky. 
I suppose poetry lends itself to self-reflection a bit. lol:
I tried to ask my inner curmudgeon before posting, but he sprayed me with the garden hose…
Yes, I have squirrels in my brain…
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Originally Posted by Bugbear
Tomboy maybe...? I can see that.
I don't know anything about whisky.
I suppose poetry lends itself to self-reflection a bit. lol:
Yeah, she's a bit of a tomboy. And my Scapa, Macduff, and Tullibardine is too...
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Originally Posted by beloitpiper
Yeah, she's a bit of a tomboy. And my Scapa, Macduff, and Tullibardine is too...
Ah ha! It's both.
Possibly at the same time... 
The tomboy girlfriend and the whisky, I mean.
I tried to ask my inner curmudgeon before posting, but he sprayed me with the garden hose…
Yes, I have squirrels in my brain…
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There was a young lady from Venus.....
 
But no.... Well done! An enjoyable poem to be sure. 
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10th May 11, 02:37 AM
#10
Originally Posted by MacMillan's son
Shows how refined I am, I thought it was about a horse!!
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Regards
Chas
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